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THE ART & CRAFT OF POETRY - RILKE


 


Steven E. McDaniel
 


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THE BEAUTY OF RILKE: TOWARD THE INFINITE LIGHT

 Steven E. McDaniel


 


The 20th century brought us an array of powerful poets that stands unequaled in any other time. The deep, shadow-bruise of two world wars, the perceived threat of the industrial Man and the control by the rich over the mechanical clones of the working class coupled with the specter of the atomic age, all fed the yearning souls of many writers. The awful desolation and disillusionment of the times pushed artists to reach higher toward the divinity of a concrete meaning in our lives.  This unusually intense movement toward the sanctity of order amidst such chaos is unprecedented in history as much as the pronounced acceleration of information in this age of computers and digital technology.

When we think of the royalty of poetry who lived in the 1900’s we naturally migrate to T.S. Eliot, William Butler Yeats, and a few others.  The early Eliot warned of the hollow, habitual thinking, industrial man that humanity was fast becoming.  He warned of the illusion of the lost and found, and its ultimate desolation, and he paved the way toward a true perception as to what is authentic in our lives.  Later, the elder Eliot came to the river of light and drank like a wise Buddha negating knowledge for actual being.
 
Easily, we also think of Yeats and his incredible blast of presences and magic, as some of the wonderful gifts he gave his readers.  Many of his works will rob the breath, as they are truly breathless with visions and spirits.  Then there is the old sage of insight, Wallace Stevens, whose metaphors of light inspire one to see without blinders.  And don’t forget Dylan Thomas whose power of paradox and contradiction, fused with vision and biblical oratory, inspired an entire generation of poets to read poetry aloud.  His command of the English language was nothing less than blazing transcendent bodies of artistic works that have no parallel.  And the poems were as melodious and rolling as the hills of Wales where he spent much of his life.  On and on, great poets lifted, like cream, to the top of humanity’s milk.  Astounding poets, such as Ezra Pound, William Carlos Williams, D.H. Lawrence, Pablo Neruda, Kenneth Patchens, Gregory Corso, Allen Ginsburg, Robert Frost, Carl Sandburg, Garcia Lorca and others graced the age.  At their best, the voices resound like a chorus of similar, uplifting music.  But there was one poet, one incredible, magnificent writer who wrote, much of the time, as if he were writing from the hand of God.  One poet who stands out much like Beethoven stands out in the 19th century: his name is Ranier Maria Rilke.

Rilke is the finest of the German language poets of recent times and, perhaps, he is the greatest poet of the 20th century.  Many scholars and renowned poets share this view that some might consider, certainly, an ostentatious opinion.  But the understanding that Rilke stands supreme is for good reason.  No other poet went to the depths of solitude nor was able to put the sacred muse into words as deeply as Rilke.  He is the poet of poets and a true conduit of the immense silences of light.   His poetry is full of trap doors that open to the edgeless sky.  Immortally, beyond the senses, Rilke mapped the way out of the senses into the throes of intuition and truth.  His work, like the spirit of life itself, is a dramatic, creative act, and leaves one standing in awe and surprise time and time again.  His poetry teaches mysticism and allows readers to behold his intimate journey as their own in grace and poetic beauty.  Rilke’s works, quite simply, are remarkable in their expressions of the scope and depths of the inexpressible.
 
Rilke was born in Prague in 1875.  He spent time in Germany and many other countries, and although he wrote in German he considered himself, vehemently, an Austrian and detested being called German.  Because Rilke, as a child and an adult, moved often he never felt a certainty about a real home.  This probably helped fuel a deeper search in his soul for an ultimate home, or place of no place, far beyond the external world of measures he and other great writers and mystics have alluded to with their works. His father was a failed military career man and subsequent railway official and his mother was an adoring but over-bearing primary figure in his early life.  Rilke became a man of deep introspection and solitude.  His spiritual affections led him to live many years mostly alone and in remote settings in Russia and elsewhere.  Friends and patrons offered up many of these secluded settings whereas he ultimately left his wife and daughter and other close relationships although he regularly maintained correspondence with a number of literary interests. World War 1 affected Rilke deeply, as it did many artists of the times, and he seemed to leave the outside world for the solitude of his inner reflections.  He hated being trapped in Germany, by circumstance, throughout much of the war.
A big turning point came early in Rilke’s life when he was a secretary for the famous French sculptor, Auguste Rodin.  He was guided by Rodin who told him that to be a better poet he must find God in the simple things of the world, to write more about the vast in the small, and find an empirical union with the object.  In some ways, he began a new, spiritual quest by abandoning his inspirational emotions for the higher art of universal meaning and truth in the things of the world.  Rodin was instrumental in his example of, every day, making his world with the tools of discipline, hard work and introspection.  Rilke’s subsequent collection, New Poems attested to this rising transformation within him.  Another instrumental influence on Rilke’s life was his first love affair with the older, Lou Andreas Salome, a leading, world therapist and protégé of Freud.  Her mentoring of Rilke with her deep insights of human analysis helped set the stage for the blossoming of this remarkable poet.
 Many of Rilke’s works were created with amazing bursts of creative energy.  Then, there would be long lulls as if a storm were brewing a flood.  Time and time again Rilke would stir into a blazing lightening-rod of divine insight where he would write most of his collections in relatively small durations measured in days.  A couple of exceptions include The Book of Images written over a period of about eight years (1899-1907) and the incredible Duino Elegies that took twelve years to write.  Yet, most of the second half of the Duino Elegies and the entire writing of The Sonnets to Orpheus were “dictated”, as Rilke called it, in a matter of weeks.  These are two of the most amazing poetry collections ever written, as Rilke seemed to transcribe the poems from a deep, mystical state.  Rilke’s very first larger collection of poems, known as A Book for the Hours of Prayer (Bly) and more recently published as Love Poems To God (Barrows) shows the magnitude of the man as a young poet. 
                       “I love the dark hours of my being in which
                       my senses drop into the deep,” and  “In the silent,
                       sometimes hardly moving times when something
                       is coming near, I want to be with those who know
                       secret things or else alone.”
Other Rilke works include the prose writings of The Lay of the Love and Death of Cornet Rilke, The Notebooks of Malte Laurids Brigge (his only novel) and others. His Letters To A Young Poet is a prose classic and a must-read for aspiring poets. 
Rilke has been criticized for being too introverted; or inward, as the trend of the 20th century leaned to the extraverted insights unleashed from the outer experience.  And even though Neruda was critical of Rilke’s complete aversion to the politics of the world, he later recanted, as have most critics. After all, Rilke was dealing with a higher politics of experience, revelations and awakening, and many on levels that requires its readers to be as deep as the writer in order to really understand the works.  But this is true of all poets.  A poet is only as good as his audience.  But Rilke’s work is much too amazing for any intelligent, adverse criticism for he speaks too eloquently to the inward silence in us all.
Major translations of Rilke’s works include various editions by Edward Snow, Robert Bly, Franz Wright, Stephen Mitchell, and others.  I highly recommend, ‘Ahead of All Parting: The Selected Poetry and Prose of Rainer Maria Rilke by Mitchell as a companion book for all poets and true lovers of poetry.  This collection includes the complete Duino Elegies and Sonnets To Orpheus, and other selections.
Personally, I feel the The Duino Elegies is Rilke’s greatest works.  It reads like many poems contained in one and it is a movement inside and toward spiritual realization on a scale so extremely rare in poetry.  The collection is, truly, a most solemn prayer encompassing a vision of the unseen beauty behind all beauties.  Because of the scope of this work, unprecedented except for the writings of perhaps, Wordsworth, Blake, and Whitman, I am going to give an unusual, succinct and highly edited account of the ten elegies. I urge you to read, or re-read this man’s work in its entirety.  Please do not rob yourself any further of the best of the best poetry ever written.  In hopes of inspiring those who are not very familiar with Rilke, and for those looking for deeper insights not previously revealed, I begin a most audacious attempt to bring some light upon this great body of poems.  So, we begin . . . toward the infinite light.
The first of the ten elegies begins with Rilke asking “Who, if I cried out, would hear me among the angels’ hierarchies?”  He goes on to write further in the stanza, “I would be consumed in that overwhelming existence.  For beauty is nothing but the beginning of terror . . . and we are awed because it serenely disdains to annihilate us.”   Immediately, Rilke surrounds us with a great truth: that the power of the unseen, our creator and destroyer, is our paramount beauty and source.  To be our beauty and our annihilation, as one power, leaves us with nothing less than awe, wonder and a startling sense of fear in our observations. Rilke moves on to deep insights about what animals know (he dances in and out of these themes in much of his works) and what we can learn from them.  He speaks of our longing for understanding, for the immortal life beyond the living, and our seeing beyond death with praise for the simple light of things.  And he reveals how there is a great height and inspiration in the loss of a beloved that allows us to go far beyond the metaphors of our lives, and to find the truth of love with, ultimately, no object.  He implores us to embrace our death and sufferings as necessary and beautiful for they direct us to God, the source of all beauty.  “Voices.  Voices.  Listen, my heart, as only saints have listened, until the gigantic call lifted them off the ground.”  Rilke invites us, “ To listen to the voice of the wind and the ceaseless message that forms itself out of silence.  It is a murmuring toward you now from those who died young.”  On he writes, relentless in his haunting pursuit, “We for whom grief is so often the source of our spirit’s growth . . . could we exist without them?”  Yes, those who died young, “Carried off no longer needing us . . .weaned from earth’s sorrows and joys, as gently as children.”  This and much more in just his first elegy!
Throughout the Duino Elegies, Rilke talks of angels and to the angels.  In the Second Elegy he chants, then urges, almost pleading, “But if the archangel, perilous, from behind the stars took even one step down toward us: our own heart, beating higher and higher would beat us to death.  Who are you?”  Rilke implores this invisible presence to reveal itself although it has the power to annihilate us with its mere presence, as it must for us to be our truth.  He goes on to lament and rejoice that image and world comes and goes as we, too, vanish as candles into a bigger light.  “When moved by deep feeling, (we) evaporate.”   Rilke mourns, and yet, rejoices in his catharsis, that “Everything it seems wants to hide us” from our realization of truth, and he begs us to prove our truth of being.  “You hold each other.  Where is your proof?’   He takes us to what never vanishes; yet it is unseen and cannot be proven by the transitory image of things, but by its invisible presence of a feeling within.  This is the inner union of life and death, of all that disappears into the infinite light.  It is the light of our souls.  Not as the narcissistic rant of reductionism into nothingness, but of the unending life-energy at the end of the organic, living tunnel, of the absolute everything in presence, understanding and grace.  Rilke astonishes us with his insights, “ For our own heart always exceeds us . . .and when we can no longer follow it, gazing into the images that soothe it . . .it achieves a greater repose.”  Rilke tells us clearly that our hearts are of a peace much bigger than us, and he guides us to think deeply but more, importantly, he lets us feel the traversed distances of God at peace inside us.  Ah, deeper than the oceans or the vast voids of space, he grows you round the very depths of your own longing heart.  He plunges you into yourself and warns of the false self-deluded with judgment and the habitual, thinking mind.  His dissection of love and lovers, with their spiritual and perilous ramifications, is explored in the Third Elegy with Rilke, again, moving toward his beauty and terror as one.  “Oh, gently, gently, let him see you performing, with love, some confident daily task,- lead him out close to the garden, give him what outweighs the heaviest night . . . Restrain him . . .” Rilke’s very words explain his own moving passion for the seas of truth, “But inside: who could ward off, who could divert, the floods of origin inside him?”
In the Fourth Elegy Rilke delves further with powerful metaphor.  “We are not in harmony, our blood does not forewarn us like migratory birds.”  He compels us to take a thorough look at our human condition.  “Conflict is second nature to us.  Aren’t lovers always arriving at each other’s boundaries?  Although they promise vastness, hunting, home.”  Again, he asks the questions rapt in answers.  He takes us to the depths of our pain always longing for love and truth. “We never know the actual, vital contour of our own emotions” only to pivot his stance with certainty, “I won’t endure these half-filled human masks; better the puppet.”
Rilke challenges our so-called reality, the shallowness of our living, and he gives spiritual credence to the insights of the dying process. “The dying must notice how unreal, how full of pretense, is all that we accomplish here, where nothing is allowed to be itself.”  He laments the loss of childhood, its meaning, and he questions deeply what has been done to murder the innocence of the world - where, now, only angels sing. “Who shows a child as he really is?  Who sets him in his constellation and puts the measuring-rod of distance in his hand?” And from the Fifth Elegy he writes further about the process of lost innocence and how we build our defenses even with a common smile.
“You little boy, who fall down a hundred times daily, with the thud that only unripe fruits know . . . a loving look toward your seldom affectionate mother tries to be born in your expression; but it gets lost along the way, your body consumes it . . . and nevertheless, blindly, the smile.”  Rilke drives home how love denied sets us up for the longing of our roots and how our bodies act as the consumers of our pain to bear the awful toll of separation.  Further, in the 5th Elegy, he dissects the sleeping and awaking to abruptly hover, “And suddenly in the laborious nowhere, suddenly the unsayable spot where the pure too little is transformed incomprehensibly . . . ,”  always invoking the angels to listen to his pleas.
In the Sixth Elegy, Rilke considers a simple fig tree and how, “Almost without awaking it bursts out of sleep into its sweetest achievement.  Like the god stepping into the swan.” He laments the terrible hesitations of humanity in comparison.  “We linger, alas, we, whose pride is in blossoming, we enter the overdue interior of our final fruit and are already betrayed.”  Again and again, Rilke shows us to, simply, look around and see what nature has to teach us.  He returns, continuously, to his woven themes of those who died young and likens them to heroes who, “Plunge ahead in advance of their own smile,” as if they are the brave ones trying to speak to us a truth from the other side.  The hero of those who die young are united in Rilke’s understanding and they move in “continual ascent’ not inspired by permanence.  And he writes, “Fate . . . grows inspired and sings him into the storm of his onrushing world.”  Eloquently, Rilke has merged the dying young, archetype hero and God into one.  “I hear no one like him.  All at once I am pierced by his darkened voice, carried on the streaming air.  Then how gladly I would hide from the longing to be once again.” Rilke ends the Sixth Elegy with how mothers are the “Sources of ravaging floods . . . from the highest rim of the heart: sacrifices to the son . . . for whenever the hero stormed through the stations of love, each heartbeat intended for him lifted him up, beyond it: and turning away, he stood there, at the end of all smiles, -transfigured.” Rilke is relentless in his deep surgery to uncover our pretense and inflect the god in us all, that ultimate hero in which humanity births from the very freedom we long for, choosing ultimately to ascend beyond the doubting mire and into the revelation of waking sleeps.
Now, remember that the Sixth thru the Tenth Elegies along with the entire Sonnets To Orpheus were written in an incredible burst of insight over a period of just a few weeks.  We see in the Seventh Elegy a passionate intensity rising like a full moon over a dark forest.  Once more, Rilke uses the metaphor of a bird’s cry and beckons us to hear our own voice. “Be the nature of your cry . . . cry out as purely as a bird . . . that he is a suffering creature and not just a single heart being flung into brightness, into the intimate skies.”  Rilke writes to embrace pain and all that happens as a result in the process.  “Oh to be dead at last and know them endlessly, all the stars: for how could we ever forget them!”  He speaks clearly that the very stars and their immense illumination is the simple truth of who we actually are behind the backdrop of our longing.  He begins to rejoice in his own vision and of being in that vision of clear insight: “Children, one earthly thing truly experienced even once, is enough for a lifetime . . .truly being here is glorious.” And with great mystical understanding, Rilke teaches us to beware of this incredible joy of being without doing the important work of transforming it into meaning.  “We want to display it, to make it visible, though even the most visible happiness can’t reveal itself to us until we transform it, within.”  He is speaking to his own listening, and to God, as if in a deep spiritual prayer: “Nowhere, Beloved, will world be but within us. Our life passes in transformation.  And the external shrinks into less and less.”  Here, Rilke speaks of another profound truth: that the world, alas, the universe, is within us and slowly as we age with wisdom the external shrinks back into its original place within!  And that all, “Passes into the invisible world,” inside us.  He aptly warns, “Many no longer perceive it, yet miss the chance to build it inside themselves now, with pillars and statues; greater.”  Rilke, like Jesus and others, is telling us the kingdom of all is not out there- but inside us all, and that we must do the work to find it, to build upon it, and claim it again as our towering home.  The Seventh Elegy concludes with Rilke “wooing” the angel as if beckoning for even more understanding and light.
The Eighth and Ninth Elegies are the most profound.  In the Eight, Rilke writes about how we cage ourselves with thought and object unlike nature (and our true nature): “With all its eyes the natural world looks out into the open.  Only our eyes turned backward, surround plant, animal, childlike traps, as they emerge into their freedom.”  He explains how we take the very young child, “And force it around, so that it sees objects-not the open, which is so deep in animals’ faces.  Free from death.  We, only, can see death: the free animal has its decline in back of it, forever, and God in front, and when it moves, it moves already in eternity, like a fountain.” Rilke again laments the loss of true nature and the child in us all- the child in the natural, heavenly state of pure consciousness without the concept of time past.  He laments how we long for the child who, “Without is desire and endlessly knows,” and how lovers get close to this truth. “But neither can move past the other, and it (love) changes back to world.  Forever turned toward objects . . .,” He continuously teaches us what the animals innately know whereas we gain and lose this truth projecting our presence to past and future, continuously.  Yet, he foretells a certain sadness in animals, as well.  “For it too feels the presence of what often overwhelms us; a memory . . .”But Rilke quickly shifts back into the greater light: “Oh, bliss of the tiny creature which forever remains inside the womb that was its shelter, joy of the gnat which, still within, leaps up even at its marriage: for everything is womb.  And look at the half-assurance of the bird, which knows both inner and outer, from its source . . .” Rilke concludes the Eighth Elegy with this question, “ Who has twisted us around like this; so that no matter what we do, we are in the posture of someone going away? . . .so we live here, forever taking leave.”
In the Ninth Elegy all mystical doors fly open.  Rilke delves, at last, into why we are really here. “Why, be human?” Rilke asks.  “Oh, not because happiness exists . . . but because truly being here is so much; because everything here apparently needs us, this fleeting world, which in some strange way keeps calling to us. Us, the most fleeting of all.” Rilke cries out for us to be, “At one with the earth, if only once,” and that our deepest meaning is entwined with our, “Long experience of love, -just what is wholly unsayable. But later, among the stars . . .” He brings it home that we must find the true voice behind all words, that the objects and, indeed, our very experiences are but metaphors and symbols to be unraveled in a supreme act of realization.  He disentangles the process, “Isn’t the secret intent of this taciturn earth, when it forces lovers together, that inside their boundless emotion all things may shudder with joy?”  Love, the utmost character of God is inherent in the simple acts of being human.  “Here is the time for the sayable, here is its homeland. Speak and bear witness.  More than ever the things that we might experience are vanishing; for what crowds them out and replaces them is an imageless act.”  Profound, in that Rilke is stating that our own acts of love are what replace the seemingly vanished objects and world as the pronounced Being of ultimate reality.  He moves on to praise the “world to angel” of this divine, transcendent understanding, but that God is mostly impressed with our truth of the simple things.  “Tell him of things.  He will stand astonished . . .the unsayable one.”  And in, perhaps, the most startling stanza of the entire Duino Elegies, Rilke addresses the very Earth:
                         “Earth, isn’t this what you want: to arise within us, invisible?
                           Isn’t it your dream
                           to be wholly invisible someday?  O Earth: invisible! 
                           What if not transformation, is your urgent command? 
                           Earth my dearest, I will.  Oh, believe me, you no longer
                           need your springtimes to win me over- one of them,
                           ah, even one, is already too much for my blood.
                           Unspeakably I have belonged to you, from the first.
                           You were always right, and your holiest inspiration
                           is our intimate companion.  Death.
                            Look, I am living. On what?  Neither, childhood nor future
                            grows any smaller . . . Superabundant being
                            wells up in my heart.
This incredible passage unravels a great mystical truth: that the true nature of the world (all perceived objects) is Invisible, and present.  Reality is falsely ‘seen’ as separate objects in time whose truth is in transformation back to the vast sea of the Unseen presence within.  Further, it is our work to find this amazing truth and to carry it inside like a blossoming rose in a newfound voice of beauty.  Rilke parallels the metaphor of the earthen springtime to show us we are here, not to remain comfortable and stagnant, but to transform ourselves like Nature and her ultimate movement toward the vanishing.  It is no mistake that Rilke speaks of death as our holy companion only to allude quickly to the (childhood) past, and then the future and that they are the very twins of death. Yet, united, they grow into a super abundant being of the heart.
In the Tenth, and last, Elegy, Rilke relaxes and reflects in bliss and tears, “Let my joyfully streaming face make me more radiant, let my hidden weeping arise and blossom.”  He praises suffering as God’s great teacher; our shit, the fertilizer, that grows green the fields of life.   “How we squander our hours of pain.  How we gaze beyond them into the bitter duration to see if they have an end. Though they are really our winter-enduring foliage. . place and settlement, foundation and soil and home.” He sees the beauty in all things: the dogs, the children, and the lovers. He reflects again, with a new light, on those who died young and who follow the beauty of sorrow and lament, “The vast landscape of Lament,” a land of, “The tall trees of tears and the fields of blossoming grief (the living know it just as a mild green shrub).”  Here, Rilke tells us like Emerson once said, “A fool and wise man do not see the same tree.” More and more the remaining passages become magical, “In the twilight, she (the angel of Lament) leads him out to the graves of the elders who gave warning to the race of Laments.” This is the earth, in deep sorrow and mourning that beckons to be transcended to light.  But finally, “They look in wonder at the regal head that has silently lifted the human face to the scale of the stars, forever . . .
                                     Where shimmering in the moonlight
                                     is the fountainhead of joy.  With reverence
                                     she names it and says: Among
                                     men it is a mighty stream . . . alone
                                     he climbs on, up the mountains of primal grief . . .
                                     and we, who have always thought
                                     of happiness as rising, would feel the emotion
                                     that almost overwhelms us
                                     whenever a happy thing falls.”
Alas, Rilke connects all the symbols and metaphors into the simple act of raindrops weeping into the earth in springtime: all in the name of growth.  In the growth-grief of our longing is the mountain to be traversed to our ultimate origin born out of the graves of all who have lived and died.  There, in the silence of our true being, the human condition is transcended into the stars.  This transcendence, the source of all joy is, in the final analysis, no greater than the pain and power of our emotion, “Whenever a happy thing falls.” All is, ultimately, the oneness of God, as we stand breathless in our divine beauty of being here. 
Rilke died of leukemia in 1926, four years after completing the Duino Elegies and The Sonnets to Orpheus.  He wrote the following epitaph on his gravestone in Switzerland:
                                       Rose, oh pure contradiction, joy
                                       of  being No-one’s sleep
                                       under so many lids.
 



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Steven McDaniel is an award-winning video producer, writer and graphic artist.  His upcoming documentary project on the mystic Richard Francis is slated for production in Spring 2008.


 

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